نمونه پاسخ IELTS Speaking Part 2 – مقایسه نمره 6.5، 7 و 9 با آنالیز

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بخش دوم آزمون اسپیکینگ آیلتس (IELTS Speaking Part 2) جاییه که خیلی از داوطلب‌ها گیر می‌کنن. شما فقط یک دقیقه فرصت دارید نوت‌برداری کنید و بعد باید حدود دو دقیقه بدون توقف صحبت کنید.
اما مشکل رایج اینجاست: بیشتر زبان‌آموزها فقط ۳۰–۴۰ ثانیه صحبت می‌کنن، از کلمات تکراری مثل very good یا nice استفاده می‌کنن، و زود حرفشون تموم میشه.

در این مقاله ۳ نمونه پاسخ واقعی رو می‌بینید: یکی در سطح Band 6.5، یکی در سطح 7، و یکی در سطح 9. بعد با هم آنالیز می‌کنیم چه چیزهایی باعث تفاوت نمره میشه. در آخر هم تکنیک‌هایی می‌دم که خودتون بتونید تمرین کنید.

چرا IELTS Speaking Part 2 مهم است؟

  • شما باید توانایی گسترش ایده‌ها و تسلط بر زبان انگلیسی رو نشون بدید.
  • ممتحن بر اساس ۴ معیار نمره می‌ده: Fluency & Coherence، Vocabulary، Grammar و Pronunciation.
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  • بدون ساختار و جزئیات، گرفتن نمره بالای ۷ خیلی سخته.

نمونه پاسخ Band 6.5

“I want to talk about a trip I had last year. It was a trip to the north of Iran with my family. It was very good and I really liked it. The weather was very nice and the food was very good too. We stayed in a small hotel. The hotel was very good and comfortable. Every day we went to the beach and it was very fun. I took a lot of photos of the sea and also of the mountains. The nature was very good and beautiful. Sometimes we went shopping and the shops were very good too. I ate kebab and fish, and the food was very tasty and very good. The trip was very good and I enjoyed it a lot. I think it was one of the best trips of my life, because it was very good and I liked it very much. That’s all.”

تحلیل Band 6.5

  • طول جواب تقریباً پر شده (۱ دقیقه و نیم → ۱۵۰–۱۷۰ کلمه).
  • اما واژگان بسیار تکراری (very good بیش از ۸ بار!).
  • جزئیات کلیشه‌ای (hotel was very good, nature was very good).
  • تنوع دستوری و لغوی پایین.
  • با این حال، به خاطر طول بیشتر از سطح ۵–۵.۵ بالاتره، و ممکنه ۶ یا ۶.۵ بگیره.

نمونه پاسخ Band 7

“Two years ago, I went on an overnight bus ride from Karaj to Tabriz with two of my close friends. It was a tiring but exciting journey that lasted almost twelve hours. The bus left at around 10 p.m., and although I was very sleepy, I couldn’t fall asleep easily because the seats were not very comfortable. I still remember the conversations I had with the two passengers sitting next to me. They were university students, and they told funny stories about their classes, which made the trip more enjoyable and helped us forget the discomfort.

During the ride, I listened to some music on my phone and watched the view outside the window. The road was quite dark, but from time to time we could see small villages with bright lights, and that was interesting. The next morning, when we finally arrived in Tabriz, I felt both exhausted and happy at the same time. It was definitely a memorable journey for me.

 

In the future, however, I would prefer to travel by train because it is faster and much more comfortable compared to the bus. I think that would make the whole experience easier and more relaxing.”

تحلیل Band 7

  • استفاده از چارچوب PPF (گذشته، حال، آینده) → Past (شروع سفر)، Present (جزئیات و احساسات)، Future (ترجیح برای قطار).
  • واژگان بهتر نسبت به 6.5: exhausted, memorable, enjoyable, uncomfortable.
  • لینکرها وجود دارن ولی ساده‌ن: because, however, and, but.
  • جزئیات هست (دانشجوها، روستاهای روشن)، اما خیلی عمیق نیست.

نمونه پاسخ Band 9

Once, about two summers ago, I boarded a night bus from Karaj to Tabriz. At first, I assumed it would be just another ordinary and boring trip, but it surprisingly turned into one of the most unforgettable journeys of my life. The bus left around 10 p.m., and in the beginning everyone was silent, trying to sleep. The seats were narrow, the air conditioning wasn’t working properly, and the road was quite bumpy. I remember thinking it might be a nightmare.

However, a few hours later, the bus suddenly broke down in the middle of the highway. At first we were all annoyed and frustrated, but because of that unexpected situation, people slowly started to interact. Some passengers shared snacks, others began telling jokes and funny stories, and even a small group started singing traditional songs. Oddly enough, what seemed like a disaster became a chance for everyone to connect and create a friendly atmosphere.

Until finally, just before sunrise, the bus was fixed and we continued our journey. I can still recall the breathtaking view of the sun rising over the mountains as we approached Tabriz. That moment made me realize how even uncomfortable situations can turn into wonderful memories. In fact, the trip taught me to stay positive and flexible whenever things don’t go according to plan.

تحلیل Band 9

  • استفاده از چارچوب Story Spine کامل: Once… But one day… Because of that… Until finally…
  • واژگان پیشرفته و متنوع: unforgettable, frustrating, breathtaking, nightmare, flexible, atmosphere.
  • جزئیات حسی قوی: bumpy road, air conditioning, sunrise over the mountains.
  • انسجام بالا، جمله‌های ترکیبی و طبیعی.
  • حس روایت (narrative flow) → دقیقاً چیزی که ممتحن دنبالشه.

چطور خودتان تمرین کنید؟

  • از چارچوب‌ها استفاده کنید: جواب‌هاتون رو با PPF یا Story Spine بسازید.
  • صداتون رو ضبط کنید: یک موضوع انتخاب کنید، جواب بدید، ضبط کنید، و دوباره گوش بدید.
  • جایگزین واژه‌های کلیشه‌ای: به‌جای very good بگید excellent / outstanding / impressive.
  • تمرین با Answer Bank: فایل Answer Bank شامل نمونه پاسخ‌های آماده هست که می‌تونید روزانه باهاش تمرین کنید.

Part 2 یکی از مهم‌ترین بخش‌های اسپیکینگ آیلتسه. تفاوت بین نمره 6.5، 7 و 9 فقط در «واژگان بیشتر» نیست، بلکه در داشتن ساختار، جزئیات، و روانی صحبت کردنه.
اگر می‌خواید نمره بالاتر بگیرید، همین امروز تمرین با PPF و Story Spine رو شروع کنید.

👉 برای نکات بیشتر، پیج و کانال Filmozaban رو دنبال کنید.
📤 این مقاله رو با دوستاتون که آیلتس می‌خونن به اشتراک بذارید.

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